TMA 3 back :-)
got back from Oulton to find that my previous essay had been marked and was ready to download from the OU website. 78% for this one with lots of lovely comments about well developed, wide ranging arguements and successful use of a sustained comparative aproach - comparing the 3 different texts with each other point by point rather than writing about each text seperately otherwise known as interweaving (or basketweaving depending on how bad tempered I’m feeling wtih the essay at the time!)
So, now I just need to polish up the current one with a few bits and tips taken from her notes on the last one (historical context not being clear enough mainly - oops! it’s a history course!!!) and on to New Lanark Mills and changes in society and social reform.
well done you!
Comment by jax — May 28, 2007 @ 10:15 pm
well done you. i don’t know how you find the time!
Comment by HelenHaricot — May 28, 2007 @ 10:49 pm
Thanks, usually I find the time by wilfully neglecting my poor under-educated child for half an hour in the morning and another half an hour later (any longer and I start doing that goldfish thing…) then arrange to be child-less for a few hours every now and then to do the mind map to essay plan to first draft (then forget it for a week or two, come back, revamp, etc!!!)
Comment by Administrator — May 28, 2007 @ 11:11 pm
Brilliant, again!!!
Comment by Joanna — May 29, 2007 @ 1:13 pm